Sunday, November 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 11/13: Lady Silver



My god, she’s going to take it off. The sheer anticipation almost overwhelmed him. His gaze locked on her. In the past, he had lovers who disposed of their clothing in front of him, but never had that moment been as exciting as this one. It was like all his dreams were about to be exposed. He clenched the neck of the wine bottle as the hood fell from her head.

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19 comments:

Veronica Scott said...

I like this, sets the mood right away and makes you want to know what happens next! Really enjoyed the excerpt!

Patricia Preston said...

Thanks, Veronica!

Dee Carney said...

Love his anticipation!

Cate Masters said...

No fair leaving off there, lol. Great teaser.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Wonderful way to show his anticipation. His excitement i8s palpable.

Like the new header pic for the blog, too, btw.

Jenna said...

Why do I think she's going to tease him to death and then leave the mask on? Because that's what I would do? LOL His anticipation is palpable. Loved this six.

Meg Maguire said...

Like the notion of his dreams being exposed. Very nice.

Amy said...

Great six! Love how his anticipation of seeing her face eclipses his anticipation of seeing other women's... ahem... parts. Really speaks to the emotion going on inside him! And, btw... LOVE New Orleans. One of my favorite places on the planet!

Cherie Marks said...

Clenched is a good word to show the tension! Great six!

Carly Fall said...

Great six! Great anticipation and tension. I want to know what she looks like!

Krystal Wade said...

Take it off!

Paula Martin said...

Ooh, great! I love his anticipation! Super six!

Eleri Stone said...

Love the first line. lol. And the idea that exposing her face excites him more than others dropping their clothes.

Alix said...

Great anticipation painted into your six! Well done.

Elaine Cantrell said...

I could feel the excitement in the air. Well done!

Vivien Jackson said...

Best first line of a SSS ever! The rest of the snippet follows logically, and this short bit was a pleasure to read. I'm looking forward to getting to read all of this story. Hurry up and finish it! :)

Jessica Subject said...

An intense and exciting six!

diannehartsock said...

You can't leave it like this! aaaahhh... I'll never get to see what she looks like. Well, maybe I will next week? ;)

Patricia Preston said...

I appreciate everyone's comments. I'm trying to get LS finished up this month. Hopefully by next week!